Wednesday, August 12, 2009

The Enchanted Glade

In these misty woods I see
Lots of bushes,plants and trees
In this enchanting glade I hear
Lots of birds singing bright and clear

In this place I can look
At lots of flowers in every nook
In a cavern lives an immortal fairy
Whenever I see her she looks wary

This magical glade I will never forget
I always see flying cattle egrets
A sorrow it is to part with it
This glade from my mind I will never omit

5 comments:

  1. LMS! Great poem! Love your rhyme!

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  2. Hi girlies! I'm really glad you set up your own blog...it's such a nice thing to have. I know my own blog has been a buddy to me for the last five years. Keep writing.

    Hugs,
    Tia Didi

    P.S. Did you know that 'yen' means a strong desire...like when you really want something, you have a yen for it?

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  3. thank's Liquifier didi!Thank you for commenting on our poems!Hope you keep commenting on our writings and hope that you can guide us too!Lots of HUGS to you too! :-)

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  4. Anonymous14/8/09 08:49

    thanks everyone!
    i got the idea from sleeping beauty

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  5. Anonymous24/8/09 21:50

    congratulations to the bloggers! It's a great way to express your thoughts and feelings.
    "The Enchanted Glade" was charming. It took me to a fairy tale land.

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